Steve writes like that.
All the time.
And this "musically hypnotic" writing can be found in the story he was kind enough to contribute to the Feeding Kate anthology. The Rewards is an incredibly realistic and hypnotic tale of a family gathering with one too many awkward moments. Moments I think we can all relate to... cringe-worthy even. In fact, it's almost like he's pulled a memory from my brain and shared it with the world. So weird.
Steve pulling memories from my brain...
When my wife said we’d been invited to meet some
family and visit the DC zoo, I had no idea how costly a night it would become.
We live close enough to DC that we can toodle in for
a day trip to the zoo or the Smithsonians and then toodle our way back home
after dark.
Her family connections were staying over in
Bethesda, so they thought we all might want to stay in the same hotel, enjoy
the pool the night before, have dinner close by. Sounded great.
The hotel has an indoor pool, which is kinda fancy.
When I was a kid, we went to a family reunion (some distant family relations)
in a Holidome. It was a Holiday Inn, but in a dome. They had indoor pools. And
shuffleboard. At which, I must say, I showed considerable sports prowess, as
you might expect.
In Bethesda, my wife’s cousin had made reservations
for us at the restaurant in the hotel. Which is fine. I didn’t know whether it
was Denny’s, as this wasn’t the LaQuinta, but I figured it would be fine.
I’d never eaten at a Morton’s Steakhouse before. I’m
more a Western Sizzler kind of guy. Actually, I’m more of a Bonzana fan, but I
haven’t seen one of those in a while. Big baked potato and an iceberg salad.
Jello cubes in a too-small bowl. An overcooked piece of beef I’d misordered.
Ah, Bonanza.
We got to Morton’s and headed for our table. Only,
it wasn’t a table. It was a room. The room I describe in the FEEDING KATE story
I wrote, “The Rewards.” While much of the story – the in-laws, the psychic
assaults, the baby problem – was fictionalized, the setting was pulled from our
Morton’s visit fairly whole cloth, as it were. Even the desertion of the women
as the check arrived was real-ish.
That setting helped me find the story for “The
Rewards,” that terrible awkwardness in the face of family stress, that
subterranean conflict cracking through.
I have never paid so much money for future poo-poo
in my life. Lord willing and the creek don’t rise, I’ll never have to again.
But I could, without the difficulty faced by the poor guy in my story. If I
were a better man, I could tell that the next day I dedicated myself to funding
a food bank for the hungry. I didn’t. Instead, the positive that followed is
that I spent the entire day at the zoo and never once complained about how
expensive their $7 hamburgers were.
Steve Weddle grew up
on the Louisiana/Arkansas line, holds an MFA in creative writing from Louisiana
State University, and currently works for a newspaper group. He lives with his family in Virginia. His novel COUNTRY HARDBALL will be published by Tyrus Books in November 2013. The book is set for simultaneous release as hardback, paperback, ebook, and audio book.
Feeding Kate: A Crime Fiction Anthology is available from Amazon. All proceeds from Feeding Kate benefit the Lupus Foundation of America.
Feeding Kate: A Crime Fiction Anthology is available from Amazon. All proceeds from Feeding Kate benefit the Lupus Foundation of America.
